Wednesday, June 3, 2009

Descriptive Piece " It Was Hot"

As we were pulling into Killeen Texas, my heart was racing with excitement. I jumped out of the rider truck, and began to gasp for air. I was struck with a climate change like no other. The air was thick, and humid that couldn't breathe. My face started to drip with sweat, and there was no breeze to save me. It felt like i hadn't taken a bath for a week, because i was so sticky. Much to my surprise the day was reaching night, and it was still 90 degrees! I peeled the hair off of my neck, and at that moment my excitement turned to regret as i realized there was no turning back.

1 comment:

  1. Great line: "I peeled the hair off of my neck"! I can picture it and feel it!

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